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Blown childhood's dreams

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When I was a child, I was a Jedi,
When I was teenager, I became a rebel,
Now I'm a man, walking through the dark side,
Guided by something in my head that I can't expel.

Humans are so strange, this planet can't be mine.
I surely came from another star, lost in the Milky Way,
To misunderstand these peoples, and never see a sign.
Like if I was here since only yesterday.

Peoples here add and reject you at the light' speed,
And they don't use some mystical power to do it.
Because the dark side is in fact already in their seeds,
And they rarely feel the guilt of the harms they commit.

Their world is like a boiling cauldron,
Where are blending violence, blood and tears,
In spite of these fucking promises, which always fall down.
They need more love to forget heir doubts and fears.
© 2013 - 2024 silverdoomofparis
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skygazing's avatar

"Humans are so strange, this planet can't be mine." <-- exactly what i ask myself every day haha :love:

i like the consistent allusions & connection to outer space, it definitely gives the poem more depth

wahh you are inspiring me to keep on writing poetry :heart: i think i'm going to upload something soon ^0^